Wednesday, August 08, 2007

A journal entry "Monster"

He hated the label, "monster," but he could understand why they called him that. He saw the papers; he knew the routine. They refused to meet with him, discuss what he figured out was the most important--deciding on an agenda that worked only for them.
Yet he was the monster.
He exercised as they did. He ate at thei same restaurants. And he practiced his ability to love just like everyone else. They let the fucking homos do what they want--even gave them their own television shows.
But not him.
There was a time, when he was younger, he would sit on the stoop in front of his house and have a cricket or a cicada taped to teh pavement. They never cried out as used his mother's twizzers pull it's legs in opposite directions. It did not weep. Instead it merely appeared annoyed at the procedure and tried to pull away.
And he wondered, why don't humans do the same?
He practiced with his subjects. He told them what we was going to do, but they protested. They were the lonely ones--wassn't this what they wanted? Attention until they died?
The latest report in the newspaper labled him Marlowe Monster for his use of hookers on Marlowe street. But these women had already given up on their lives. He was just helping them die faster then their lifestyle would allow.
Yet he was the monster.

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Wow, ummmm. Okay, I definitely have the image. It's kind of the "train wreck, I don't want to watch, but I can't help it" sort of way. I want to know where the monster is from, what's his reason? How did he get to this point? Will I feel pity for his situation even though his response is detestable?
There is a preconceived "Saw" kind of ending somehow. I understand this is just a short (I mean short) portion of the overall, but it seems the movie would be grotesque. translation: the writing is cerebral, transition to the big screen would not be.

Love reading the work though. Glad you are still finding the time to write. Sorry you took the time to read my critique of it.

Nothin' but love, JD

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